jai
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Give Into The Night
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Post by jai on Feb 9, 2010 14:36:37 GMT -5
After entering her house, I thought "This is heaven", but walking in I realized I was in hell. (Compound-Complex Sentence & Prepositional Phrase) I had to start looking at her dog, a golden retriever, and his face looked funny because his tounge was starting to come out. (Compound Sentence, Appositive Phrase, Infinitive Phrase, & Gerund Phrase) While sitting and staring at her dog began to bore me, so I got up, and went into the kitchen to get a soda that was in her fridge. (Participal Phrase, Compound-Complex Sentence, Adverbial Clause, & Adjectival Clause) But when she walked out nearly naked I knew it was all worth it. ;D (Simple Sentence)
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 15, 2010 21:38:08 GMT -5
You have to identify the component parts, not just say where they are. Revise accordingly.
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