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[mariayepez]

On a hot summer day, during the month of June, I went to the beach to tan, while Brandon got a sunburn. Amanda, who was playing volleyball, fell on her knee. When Brandon saw that she was hurt, he ran to help her which made her feel better. We tried not to tell her that her knee looked devastating, bleeding so she wouldn't freak out.



sentence uno: compound-complex, compound, complex
sentence dos: prepositional, appositive, simple.
sentence tres: adverbial, adjectivial
sentence cuatro: gerund, participle, infinitive

[Mr. Wells]

You have to identify the component parts, not just say where they are. Also, one sentence cannot be three different sentence types - it is either simple, or complex, or compound, or compound-complex. Every sentence is one of those four types. Revise.

[mariayepez]

On a hot summer day, during the month of June, I went to the beach to tan and Susannah went swimming, while Brandon, my friend, got sunburn. Amanda, who was playing volleyball by the pier, fell on her knee. When Brandon saw that she was hurt, he ran to help her which made her feel better. I went to get a band aid, and Brandon tried to comfort her.