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Post by reneeharrow on Feb 3, 2010 14:25:14 GMT -5
People were screaming; blood was gushing everywhere.(compund) After they experienced such horror, many ran for cover.(adverbial,complex) While tree branches are in mid-air, and cars capsized, Mr Steven, an old nextdoor neighbor, scrambled for safety.(compound-comlex, apossitive). He kept running towards higher ground because degree cluttered sidewalks.(simple sentence, participial phrase,adjectivial). Two days later many people intended to search tediously until they found Mr. Steven.(infinitive phrase)
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 15, 2010 21:34:25 GMT -5
You have to identify the component parts, not just say where they are. Revise accordingly.
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