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Post by reneeharrow on Feb 2, 2010 13:56:03 GMT -5
1.According to my friends, my room is ugly because my floor is cluttered with clothes.
2.In the backyard, John is walking the dog while Susan feeds the cat.
3.According to everyone physics is difficult. However, it is how we apply our knowldge that makes it by far easy to understand.
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 15, 2010 17:14:23 GMT -5
1) CORRECT
2) INCORRECT - this is a complex sentence
3) INCORRECT - parallel structure not evident
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Post by reneeharrow on Feb 19, 2010 0:38:42 GMT -5
2. John went in the backyard, and Susanna fed the dogs and cats.
3. Before I went to visit my grandpa, I had only my pocketbook. After I left for home, I had two backpacks loaded with mangoes and oranges.
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Post by Mr. Wells on Mar 22, 2010 7:46:45 GMT -5
2. INCORRECT - this is a compound-complex sentence, and it should be only compound (2 or more ind. clauses)
3. CORRECT, but one pet peeve error evident
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Post by reneeharrow on Mar 25, 2010 10:10:04 GMT -5
2. John went in the backyard, and Susanna fed the dogs and cats.
3. Before I went to visit my grandpa, I had only my pocketbook. After I left for home, I had two backpacks loaded with mangoes and oranges.
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