Susannah and Maddie

[susannahhuang]

1) Maddie, the girl sitting next to me, is having a hard time coming up with a sentence.

2) The girl sitting next to me, who is named Susannah, is a smart know-it-all Asian.

3) Shirley, a diseased koala bear, NEEDS YOUR HELP.

4) Snowflake, an ugly male poodle, was mysteriously attacked by a razor.

5) I order you to fulfill the requests that my client, Polly Pocket, has so persistently made.

[Mr. Wells]

1) Maddie, the girl sitting next to me, is having a hard time coming up with a sentence. CORRECT

2) The girl sitting next to me, who is named Susannah, is a smart know-it-all Asian. INCORRECT - this is a subordinate clause

3) Shirley, a diseased koala bear, NEEDS YOUR HELP. CORRECT

4) Snowflake, an ugly male poodle, was mysteriously attacked by a razor. CORRECT

5) I order you to fulfill the requests that my client, Polly Pocket, has so persistently made. INCORRECT

[susannahhuang]

2) Susannah, the girl sitting next to me, is a smart know-it-all Asian.
5) I order you to fulfill the requests that Polly Pocket, my distressed client, has so persistently made.

[Mr. Wells]

All CORRECT