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Post by sherrikabby11 on Jan 31, 2010 23:49:11 GMT -5
In this political cartoon you see Obamas' campaign logo. However in this logo Obama's Posture is slouched. The facial expression is completely opposite of the original Obama logo; instead of looking up the eyes are turned down. The artist is trying to convey the strength level of Obamas 'Hope' a year later. In 'Hope One Year Later' the cartoonist use Obama facial expression to represent the attitude of many Americans today; Hope for change is slowly dieing. Obama's health care plan walked into a brick wall because Repubicans refuse to give up without a fight. Obama lost many of his supporter due to promises that didn't come through with haste. Troops still battling in Iraq, homes being forclosed; Unemployment rate is at an all time high. Just like Obama's head in the picture many Americans are leaning towards the republicans. Would there ever be a rebirth of Hope ?
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 14, 2010 23:34:37 GMT -5
Description: 5
Interpretation: 5 (should only be in first paragraph)
Knowledge of Topic: 5
Thesis Statement: 0 the thesis statement evident is appropriate for an analytical piece, but the second paragraph should be an argumentative piece. No mention of the cartoon should be evident in the second paragraph.
Opinion Stated: 5
20/25 -10(missing apostrophe in first paragraph; missing capitalization of Republicans)
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Post by sherrikabby11 on Feb 15, 2010 20:25:14 GMT -5
Just like Obama's head in the picture many Americans are leaning towards the Republicans.
However, in this logo Obama's Posture is slouched.
The Hope of many americans a year later have dwindled. Obama's health care plan walked into a brick wall because Repubicans refuse to give up without a fight. Obama lost many of his supporter due to promises that didn't come through with haste. Troops still battling in Iraq, homes being forclosed; Unemployment rate is at an all time high. With the thirst of change many Americans have now turned to the Rebulican Party. Would there ever be a rebirth of Hope ?
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 27, 2010 22:50:08 GMT -5
Did not capitalize Americans in re-write.
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Post by sherrikabby11 on Mar 14, 2010 20:46:02 GMT -5
The Hope of many Americans a year later have dwindled.
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