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Post by xxstevensimxx on Jan 30, 2010 11:30:51 GMT -5
 In this cartoon President Obama is shown in an upset position on top of the word hope. he also looks very frustrated after his first year of president. The bar of the letter H has also fallen to the ground with the word "clunk" above it. The area that Obama is located looks like a deserted place were all objects have left and it is just Obama by himself to think about how to make things better for the days to arrive. There is a newspaper article title "Obamas Agenda Divides Nation". In my opinion Obama is doing the best job that he is able to do. Obama had to come into this presidency with high optimism among the america and outer world population. He's being bombarded with rage, excitement, and the highest expectations that no normal president can fix. Many people want the economic crisit to end, as do i, but will take enormous efforts and tremendous amounts of time and patiences. All Obama needs is just the greatest amount of support from the Americans and the world. |
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 14, 2010 20:11:32 GMT -5
Description: 5
Interpretation: 2 Only an implicit interpretation evident
Knowledge of Topic: 4
Thesis Statement: 4 missing direction
Opinion Stated: 5
20/25 -20 (there is; missing apostrophe; in my opinion; missing capitals [several])
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Post by xxstevensimxx on Feb 22, 2010 18:41:48 GMT -5
In this cartoon President Obama is shown in an upset position on top of the word hope. He also looks very frustrated after his first year of president. The bar of the letter H has also fallen to the ground with the word "clunk" above it. The area in which Obama is located, looks like a deserted place were all objects and people have left and it is just Obama by himself to think about how to make things better for the days to arrive. There is a newspaper article title "Obama's Agenda Divides Nation".
In my opinion Obama is doing the best job that he is able to do. The hope that I think people were talking about is when Obama's health care appeal failed. This lessened the "hopes" of many uninsured Americans. Obama had to come into this presidency with high optimism among the American nation and outer parts of the world. He's being bombarded with rage, excitement, and the highest expectations to succeed. Many people want the economic crisis to end, as do i, but this will take enormous efforts and tremendous amounts of time and patiences. All Obama needs is just the greatest amount of support from America and the world.
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Post by Mr. Wells on Feb 27, 2010 22:45:09 GMT -5
Steven - I've highlighted all the pet peeve errors you have made. Please correct only those sentences with pet peeve errors.
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Post by xxstevensimxx on Feb 28, 2010 10:05:43 GMT -5
In this cartoon President Obama is shown in an upset position on top of the word hope. He also looks very frustrated after his first year of president. The bar of the letter H has also fallen to the ground with the word "clunk" above it. The area in which Obama is located, looks like a deserted place where all objects and people have left and it is just Obama by himself to think about how to make things better for the days to arrive. In Obama's hand is a newspaper article title "Obama's Agenda Divides Nation".
Obama is doing the best job that he is able to do. The hope that people were talking about is when Obama's health care appeal failed. This lessened the "hopes" of many uninsured Americans. Obama had to come into this presidency with high optimism among the American nation and outer parts of the world. He's being bombarded with rage, excitement, and the highest expectations to succeed. Many people want the economic crisis to end, but this will take enormous efforts and tremendous amounts of time and patiences. All Obama desires is just the greatest amount of support from America and the world.
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