Jai and Steven

[jai]

1. Hester Prynne, after writing Scarlet Letter, was considered a genius.
2. Hester Prynne walked through the world, with a chip on her shoulder, while everyone else was very happy.
3. After Pearl played in the graveyard, she was dragged to the underworld by Hades.
4. Towards the end of Scarlet Letter, due to emotional distraught, I feel that it has wronged me very greatly.
5. As Hester escaped from the forest, Darko sat under a tree, and everyone else was in the market place.

[Mr. Wells]

1. INCORRECT

2. CORRECT (though first comma is unnecessary)

3. CORRECT, but clause not identified

4. INCORRECT - simple sentence evident

5. CORRECT, but clause not identified

[jai]

1. Hester Prynne, after she started writing, was considered a genius.
2. Hester Prynne walked through the world, with a chip on her shoulder, while everyone else was very happy.
3. After Pearl played in the graveyard, she was dragged to the underworld by Hades.
4. Towards the end of Scarlet Letter, emotional distraught endured, caused me to feel greatly wronged.
5. As Hester escaped from the forest, Darko sat under a tree, and everyone else was in the market place.

[Mr. Wells]

3. Clause not identified (must say whether subordinate clause is adjectival or adverbial)

4. Simple sentence evident

5. Clause not identified (must say whether subordinate clause is adjectival or adverbial)

[jai]

1. Hester Prynne, after she started writing, was considered a genius.
2. Hester Prynne walked through the world, with a chip on her shoulder, while everyone else was very happy.
3. After Pearl played in the graveyard, she was dragged to the underworld by Hades. (Adverbial)
4. Towards the end of Scarlet Letter, with the emotional distraught I endured, I felt greatly wronged.
5. As Hester escaped from the forest, Darko sat under a tree, and everyone else was in the market place. (Adjectivial)